Review Detail of US_DreamerDon in The Envoy of Death

Okay, I'll start with the Synopsis. It causes the potential reader to answer the questions it asks. And I definitely like that opening line. It is a good start to a good story. I definitely like the diary entries to help see what the MC was thinking. But there were times that I was brought out of the story as the MC was doing things that a 9 year old wouldn't do. Also a nick-pick, there were times where the author switches between past tense and present tense. I understand why they did it, but there is a way to write the present tense in past tense to make sense. All in all, a great story that I look forward to more chapters.