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US_DreamerDonLv143yr
2021-06-30 00:21

Okay, I'll start with the Synopsis. It causes the potential reader to answer the questions it asks. And I definitely like that opening line. It is a good start to a good story. I definitely like the diary entries to help see what the MC was thinking. But there were times that I was brought out of the story as the MC was doing things that a 9 year old wouldn't do. Also a nick-pick, there were times where the author switches between past tense and present tense. I understand why they did it, but there is a way to write the present tense in past tense to make sense. All in all, a great story that I look forward to more chapters.

The Envoy of Death

Mangaholic24_7
4.6
21 Chs

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Wow, thanks for the feed back!

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listen_moon
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Definitely a good read with action nd many more things. Would like to suggest author to add a few figure of speechs and it'll be dope. Kuddos to the author. Best of luck. ✌✌✌

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AJONAFXX
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Im a supper fan of synopsis!!! Love it!! I read some few chapters and im willing to read more! Author thnks for this story i do like it so much!

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Sumayya_Riaz
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Good! Keep it up. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 👍👍👍

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go_kizy
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A good book indeed... and i srsly loved Azzyy!! he is so loving, aring and responsible at such a young age... waiting for the new chptrs now!! Please upload them soon.. and keep it up!![img=update]

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crazycheesypotato
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This is really nice novel. I hope to read more in the future. I found this book to early. I am excited to see how story goes but for now, good work, Author-nim. keep us updated. 😊

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Garvita_Kushwaha
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Really great! The cover is amazing and plot is great. I just started reading it, it will take some time to read the whole, but whatever I've read is really nice. I would recommend you to read it.[img=recommend]

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i just started the book! and it is already so good! keep going!

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The first chapter of the book gave me a hint of a captivating book. One couldn't help, want to check what surprises the book will bring. That said, the description of the scene and background were superb. It was like the book came alive.. I will save and continue. Nice one..

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Sir_WendoS
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A pretty good read. Writing is quite good, as there are rarily any grammar mistakes. A bit of confusion might appear in a reader's thoughts due to some punctuation, but it's not that bad. Story might be a bit detailed in the beginning, thus boring, but it gets more interesting to read as the story develops, since different elements starts to break and expand into smaller events and introduce situations even better. Characters can be deemed flawless, as they are build very well. The author also tells when a character is acting out of character, which gives us even more details about the characters. Author took quite an interesting take on how he writes this novel. The world is explained in great detail, but what's interesting is that the mysteries of the world gets revealed step by step, bringing the reader into light of what is happening and why, in a perfect timing.

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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