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This is an intriguing story with an MC that was waiting for something extraordinary to happen in her life. And when it did, I guess she was not that prepared for it. XD Who will be? The start of the story is good. Maybe it's just the impatient part of me... but I want to see why Breta was never normal at a first few chapters. Even just a hint about it. All in all, this is an interesting read. Good job! Keep on writing! :)