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Abyssally
AbyssallyLv34yr
2021-05-07 05:02

I noticed that there aren't any reviews here, so I wanted to write one and share my opinion. So far, there are only two chapters, so there isn't much to go on. However, the writing seems pretty good, and I think this novel has a lot of potential.

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Thanks for your kind review!

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Pikachu_A
Pikachu_ALv3

simply this novel is great with unique concept .You guys won't able to stop yourself for craving more chapters . why you will like it - 1) update : Author sama is considerate in this matter everyday 2 chapters will be updated .So updating speed is good 2) FL : kind hearted ,little bit aloof ,she is very capable ,also not dense ,her reading the situation is amazing ,she is strong and devoted to her kingdom 3)ML : another kind hearted just like FL ,he has strong will to make FL him and he will fight with every odd ( well ,to know about obstacles read the novel ) ,he is also has a great personality 3) this novel is actually focusing on one of most important things that we often see in many wars and that is your own people's betrayal ,it will also provide you how royal politics work well another question will arise while reading this whom you will choose - your most beloved person or your own country ,off course answer will be country but if you want both theme how ? how can you make this possible to learn this join our FL and ml other characters : actually I liked everyone ,specially prince orius, lady Vienna , general Hanson ,captain Klaus actually it is not other novel where ml and FL only very much capable ,here these characters are also capable they are cunning ,specially captain is quite tough and his uncle the way they take back their lands ,our beloved ml have to face problem ... their love : FL and ml ,they love each other ,actually you will not see passionate kiss till now but simple hug ,simple word ,simple touch it's just amazing well like every royal romance there will be an unrequited love ,I think here you will probably see one but it is too early to tell this coz interested and loving someone are different. One thing is sure FL know about her feelings for ml and they are reciprocating each other very well 😊 but they have to face lots of problem ,even they can be seen in battle fighting against each other . oh you will see a healthy friendship

christina1819
christina1819Lv5
evil_a86
evil_a86Lv4

I am telling you guys ,you won't regret reading this web novel .Every chapter passes and I crave for more .Lots of twists ,mysteries ,every character is a puzzle ,it starts with deep plot and development of story is great . If I say about romance then I think if you like slow burn romance it is for you ,ari x iri relationship progress is just like a tree which is growing,now the part I am reading their relationship can considered as juvenile . You will see some betrayers and how complicated the situation is ! ,you will understand how in ancient time many kingdoms lost their freedom for these selfish people ,well the conspiracy is strong ,I think betrayers have a strong backup and position ,I don't know how our mc will solve this problem. At one point ,more accurately the situation in Qualong , it gave me vibe of 'our lost and dominated by British east Indian company for many many years which happened for many reasons among them the betrayal of own people played most crucial role ( I am from Bangladesh) now Come back to Ml and FL ,one of the best ,ml is kind hearted ,hardworking ,simple yet capable ,he has big dream and I hope he will gain it FL is smart, have a great personality ,she in this short span figure out the situation in Qulong.Some may question that why she didn't tell Our ml about her findings although she figured out many matters that is happening in the kingdom ,for them she is from enemy country still now they are actually enemy ,don't misjudge her ,she truly devoted to her country unlike other people those were born in qualong ,still have a gut to backstabbing our ML . and Both ml and FL are new to love ,they both lost their most beloved person .

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