Vamos apreciar essa bela frase de Madara e não porque eu não sei o que escrever aqui nesse revisão: "Escute... Neste mundo, sempre que houver uma luz, haverá também sombras. Enquanto o conceito de vencedores existir também deve haver perdedores. O desejo egoista de querer manter a paz provoca guerras e o ódio nasce para proteger o amor." - Madara Uchiha

Unfortunately I'm straight, I didn't find a problem and I didn't feel disgusted just uncomfortable with the +18 parts. I'm not homophobic, that's just my taste, don't criticize me the same way I won't criticize your tastes! And there's the fact that when I read something I usually go into the story in my head, like seeing me being the MC, so I dropped this story. Anyway, apart from the novel and the +18 that I have this little problem, the story is very good, at least as far as I've read. I think it would be even better if you don't have the same problem as me and you fit in with the MC and your reality, after all, being in tune with the MC makes the book more enjoyable. [Sorry for any confusion in the comment, I used google translator so...🤷‍♂️🤷‍♂️(Translator)}

Starts off good but about a quarter way through it just begins to get really gay and sexual. The story is ok but the gay sexual dialogue makes me cringe.

This is a good story. I like the plot even though the Mac seems a bit OP it’s still very good. I approve but would not recommend it for people that can’t handle romance *cough cough* my brother *cough*

I liked the premise of the story quite a bit in the beginning. A boy with a young adventurous soul. Then around chapter 24 or so, the story heavily shifts away from adventure and towards romance. Spending multiple chapters talking about romantic aspects. I’m not saying its bad, it was just a huge change that gave me whiplash.

А я все так же пишу на непонятном вам языке~~ Ваши работы все так же великолепны. Всего 8 глав, а я уже бесповоротно затянут. Хочется читать, читать и ещё раз читать. Надеюсь вы не забросите его~~ Thx author /(o3o)/

Not for me, just my personal taste is different from yours. Though.. a Femboy? I could definitely hit one of those if ya' get what I mean hahaha! (I prefer women but I could go with a really really feminine male femboy). Anyway keep being gay and happy enjoy being yourself and expressing your sexuality through your writing, have a good day sir.

On chap 27, and this is getting a little bit weird, but I'm gonna keep going

hmm. the story wasn't quite what I thought it would be. it doesn't feel like he is a child of nyx. all his powers are meh. story drags along at the start and it takes a while till anything substantial. the story should also have a romance tag with how much dialoug and writing about more romancy stuff there is. I don't mind it is gay. I'm just not a fan of anything overly romantic.

Good!!! One of the rare fics in webnovel since it's an SI-OC gay fic with powers. But, it's too horni for me, so I stopped.... Im sorry guys I've failed you! Last read: Chapter 42.