Author is still new to novel writing so there's still a lot of room to improve but his understanding of the English language was superb. The story development was kind of fast-paced I'd say take your time developing the scenes and show not tell <- the golden rule kekeke I also had a hard time wrapping my head around it but with practice it's achievable. It was hard to decide on the world background since it was mostly based on Norse mythology but still a good start. The descriptions were amazing and well-written. Good job author! <33
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