Review Detail of IQjfjwefn in Aesir - The New Age

This is my current review of the novel, hopefully you don’t give up because this is very well-done for your first novel. Writing Quality: You have great writing quality when compared to other authors on this site, but it is not perfect. I would suggest editing your novels. Updating Stability: Three novels a week is a very stable schedule, but once again not the best. Story Development: I can tell you’re inexperienced by how rushed the development feels. Take your time on each chapter, quality over quantity. Character Design: Not the best, not the worst. Average. The best description of his personality we receive is when you explain how he basically just has fun in Valhalla. World Development: You are taking an extremely complex plotline for your first novel. First he starts in what I assume is Earth, where for some reason they are at war with Russia and they are losing. Second, you give a horrible explanation of his reincarnation into Valhalla and don’t take the time to explain what the terms you use mean. Not everybody knows Norse mythology, so you should be taking the time to explain it. For your first novel it is extremely good, my advice is to not get discouraged and keep practicing 👍.