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Findmysteryinme
FindmysteryinmeLv22yrFindmysteryinme

Ah the start is really good. to be honest I loved the descriptions. you have a good writing style but I think you can work on your punctuation marks. I saw there are some unnecessary spaces between the punctuation marks. mostly in dailogues. Other than that it's a great read.

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Nightmare of the Artificial Island

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Thank you so much.