REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is finished work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were unnecessary spaces and mistyped spellings. The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️
zushe_sensei
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LIKESlc4free:The cover picture has three girls in it does that mean he will have three lovers or is it just a random picture?
Mel_Aniv:From review swap dear........please also do mine, please 🙏 😉 ❤️
Yesh! Do take your time and enjoy! I will make it free to read for the readers. So binge read all you want! Just make a review if you are ready. 😉 ✌️
zushe_sensei:yeah gladly it has lot of chapter just gimme a little time, will do
The cover picture has three girls in it does that mean he will have three lovers or is it just a random picture?
zushe_sensei:yeah gladly it has lot of chapter just gimme a little time, will do