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The story is great and you can get mesmerized by the first paragraphs of the story. Other than it making me feel my eyes a bit sore were the consecutive long paragraphs. The Quality of the story was great and the story development also.
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ReginaldDabs
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Thank you! I've tried editing the chapters and breaking up the paragraphs, and it seems to work when I view it on the computer website, but when I view it on the mobile app it doesn't seem like anything's changed. Once I get that figured out then those big ugly paragraphs should be split up much more nicely!