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BeautifulBastard
BeautifulBastardLv42yrBeautifulBastard

longer chapters and less time skips would be good but overall is going well because of the "PLOT" ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).   ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System

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Squirrel_Protector
Squirrel_ProtectorLv11Squirrel_Protector

armando_ruiz
armando_ruizLv1armando_ruiz

Autor por favor no incluya a los clones de sobra en la relaciones intima del prota! se lo agradecería mucho

SyStEm_ErRoR_404
SyStEm_ErRoR_404Lv1SyStEm_ErRoR_404

Haven't seen a meme like that in a while lolz

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

No kidding. the chapters are so short, too short. I won't even bother with this. as if even if this had 1k chapters it would be just about normal 50 chapters. waste of scrolling time.

SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthorSupremeCookie

The earlier chapters are short like 300-600 short. The chapters since 14 have like 800 words and over 20 I write at least 1000 for every chapter.

BrabbitX:No kidding. the chapters are so short, too short. I won't even bother with this. as if even if this had 1k chapters it would be just about normal 50 chapters. waste of scrolling time.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

Thats a lot better. I'm used to like 1.5k minimum a chapter to really get into it. I'll give this a try once its around 100 chapters.

SupremeCookie:The earlier chapters are short like 300-600 short. The chapters since 14 have like 800 words and over 20 I write at least 1000 for every chapter.
SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthorSupremeCookie

The current chapters around 40 are like 1300-1800.

BrabbitX:Thats a lot better. I'm used to like 1.5k minimum a chapter to really get into it. I'll give this a try once its around 100 chapters.
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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

Nice. should probably add a disclaimer at 1st chapter or description that first chapters are short and that they get longer. I know many people dont like that short chapters and usually the chapter length stays the same or becomes shorter, not the other way around, so I'm sure many people just check it and leave. me for example.

SupremeCookie:The current chapters around 40 are like 1300-1800.
SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthorSupremeCookie

I see. I guess I’ll add it in both Sypnosis and First chapter.

BrabbitX:Nice. should probably add a disclaimer at 1st chapter or description that first chapters are short and that they get longer. I know many people dont like that short chapters and usually the chapter length stays the same or becomes shorter, not the other way around, so I'm sure many people just check it and leave. me for example.
SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthorSupremeCookie

Well, now all the chapters are around 1000+ in every chapter.

BrabbitX:Thats a lot better. I'm used to like 1.5k minimum a chapter to really get into it. I'll give this a try once its around 100 chapters.
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Mijan_Ali_7969
Mijan_Ali_7969Lv1Mijan_Ali_7969

mijan

DAMM_SCHOOL
DAMM_SCHOOLLv1DAMM_SCHOOL

same

SyStEm_ErRoR_404:Haven't seen a meme like that in a while lolz