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Good original story, has a lot of potential. However, it is in desperate need of a prologue to explain some key world building things. Also Author doesnt do a very good job in explaining the setting, and transitioning scenery, though its still readable if a little confusing at times (also author a more personal critique, plz give characters names even if they arent too important for example the "bro" from chap 1-3 ish is never really given a proper name. It's just hard to follow later on is all). Critiques aside I've been enjoying the character development of MC throughout the hailstorm of unfortunate events hes experienced, and look forward to more chapters.

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Monstrous Heroic Decimation

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