Review Detail of ayen_zone in The Shadowking's Sin(Shadoukingu No Tsumi)

Nice and interesting Synopsis, Author! [img=recommend][img=recommend] The flow of the story is well-written, and the characters are interesting too. Nice choice of words, specially the dialouges. Your writing style is great, I can easily picture the scenes. 😁🙌🏻 There are some typos, but it's fine. The novel is still easy to understand, and easy to follow on what was happening. Keep up the good work, Author! 😊👍🏻 I'll keep this in my collection and read it on my free time. [img=recommend][img=recommend] A little suggestion though, try to separate some paragraphs depending on who is talking. For example; ...when he woke up, he groaned and said to himself, "Who am I?" They boy didn't expect any reply but surprisingly he heard a voice saying, "You owe me for saving your life." It's just a suggestion though, 😅😁. Sorry for the long review. 😅 But, really, you're awesome! 👍🏻