Hello author, I would like to offer myself up to edit your novel. I'm willing to do it for free aswell. I enjoy the concept but your grammar is honestly not the easiest on the eyes.
Indeed, the earlier chapters are garbage. It's my first writing experience and even I can find lots of errors. However, I am slowly improving day by day and getting a hang of it. So, have u read my recent chapters? I think they are much better.