Review Detail of Broke_the_Matrix in The Story Never Ends
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Hello guys I am the author of this book. If you are tired of seeing bullied, dark past, sister relationship, family problems and the same cliché stories. Then this novel is for you all.
The Story Never Ends
Broke_the_Matrix
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Honestly it seemed really interesting to me at first but I had to stop reading at chapter 17. It seems like its going the cliche route of "keeping a low profile". Why would he do that? Honestly what benefit will this bring him? And he just had to show his talent as 1st grade. And he's envious of other people going to higher tier sects. So why wouldn't he show at least grade 3 or 4 talent so he can go to a middle or high tier sect? It's not like it seems all that rare as we already have several "heavenly genius" level people popping up in this tiny starter city in this one continent. So showing enough talent to be a normal member of a large sect is not "high profile" or dangerous at all. He just seems to be contradicting himself with being envious and wanting to join a powerful sect and then for no absolute reason wants to all of a sudden keep a low profile. I started reading because the author stated this would be different then all those usual cliches where the mc is looked down upon but we already see people calling him trash and looking down on him in chapter 17. Sorry about the rant😅. But i'm honestly sick of reading the same cliche plot over and over. I commented here instead of posting a review because I dont think it's fair to post a bad review and lower the rating of the story When i've only read 17 chapters. Does this get better? Does he display his talent and get a high position early on in the story? And I don't mean when finally on chapter 300 or something he gets recognition in his small area, then moves on to a middle tier sect or something and it's rinse and repeat. Again, sorry for the rant, guess i'm just in the mood today.
If he could show his talent more than grade 1 then he could have surely done it. But he couldn't. I think I have explained properly how he showed his talent.
Bahri:Honestly it seemed really interesting to me at first but I had to stop reading at chapter 17. It seems like its going the cliche route of "keeping a low profile". Why would he do that? Honestly what benefit will this bring him? And he just had to show his talent as 1st grade. And he's envious of other people going to higher tier sects. So why wouldn't he show at least grade 3 or 4 talent so he can go to a middle or high tier sect? It's not like it seems all that rare as we already have several "heavenly genius" level people popping up in this tiny starter city in this one continent. So showing enough talent to be a normal member of a large sect is not "high profile" or dangerous at all. He just seems to be contradicting himself with being envious and wanting to join a powerful sect and then for no absolute reason wants to all of a sudden keep a low profile. I started reading because the author stated this would be different then all those usual cliches where the mc is looked down upon but we already see people calling him trash and looking down on him in chapter 17. Sorry about the rant😅. But i'm honestly sick of reading the same cliche plot over and over. I commented here instead of posting a review because I dont think it's fair to post a bad review and lower the rating of the story When i've only read 17 chapters. Does this get better? Does he display his talent and get a high position early on in the story? And I don't mean when finally on chapter 300 or something he gets recognition in his small area, then moves on to a middle tier sect or something and it's rinse and repeat. Again, sorry for the rant, guess i'm just in the mood today.
MoreMercury76:author says no cliche this is full cliche that is very sickening to readimage
Bahri:Honestly it seemed really interesting to me at first but I had to stop reading at chapter 17. It seems like its going the cliche route of "keeping a low profile". Why would he do that? Honestly what benefit will this bring him? And he just had to show his talent as 1st grade. And he's envious of other people going to higher tier sects. So why wouldn't he show at least grade 3 or 4 talent so he can go to a middle or high tier sect? It's not like it seems all that rare as we already have several "heavenly genius" level people popping up in this tiny starter city in this one continent. So showing enough talent to be a normal member of a large sect is not "high profile" or dangerous at all. He just seems to be contradicting himself with being envious and wanting to join a powerful sect and then for no absolute reason wants to all of a sudden keep a low profile. I started reading because the author stated this would be different then all those usual cliches where the mc is looked down upon but we already see people calling him trash and looking down on him in chapter 17. Sorry about the rant😅. But i'm honestly sick of reading the same cliche plot over and over. I commented here instead of posting a review because I dont think it's fair to post a bad review and lower the rating of the story When i've only read 17 chapters. Does this get better? Does he display his talent and get a high position early on in the story? And I don't mean when finally on chapter 300 or something he gets recognition in his small area, then moves on to a middle tier sect or something and it's rinse and repeat. Again, sorry for the rant, guess i'm just in the mood today.
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I hate romance, it's the most useless waste of time. Better reveal the characters and the story.
Broke_the_Matrix:no
Shadow_Gamer1:THIS IS SO F**KING CLICHED YOU B**TARD,IM SO IRRITATED
