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Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv13yr
2022-03-19 22:18

Itulah saya benci reinkarnator yang menjijikkan.. Dia masuk dan menganggap dirinya sendiri hebat.. Semakin saya membaca semakin muak saya dengan sikap MC yang tidak tau malu

Sign in from Douluo

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3.0
164 Chs

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gkfk
gkfkLv4

reading this make my head hurt but the story is good if you can fix the writing .

3yr

DReamer28
DReamer28Lv5

Hope you improve your Writing The story is GOOD but its Hard to understand because the Writing is a mess It makes My head ache [img=faceslap]

3yr
Pokepex_victor007
Pokepex_victor007Lv14

i presonally like overpowered MC.so this is big hit for me from the start.thank you for writing for us readers although you have no obligation to.So I wholeheartly thank you for this story.

3yr
Gomtuu76
Gomtuu76Lv4

It tries to be a story in doulou world but fails miserably. All the rules of the world are thrown away and the MC can do anything he wants. 20 spirits, no problem, get 5 spirit rings while only being level 10? Sure of course. Get 10,000 and 100,000 spirit ring at 6 years old with out your soul backlash? Absolutely. Basically the MC does not follow any rules and goes from a 6 year old to 15 year old in one month and courting girls. So read if you can ignore all the flaws of the world if not it will drive you crazy with the amount of plot holes that are never explained.

3yr
pavan_kumar_0719
pavan_kumar_0719Lv1

Too bad that the hero is becoming OP too fast and the story writing is not clear. focus on quality of chapters rather than quantity...and directly increasing 6 yr old guy to spirit level 60 is a buzz kill

3yr
Jovian_Ricardo
Jovian_RicardoLv4

the sign in is good but the story just to weird it doesn't like douluo dalu 6 years old didn't cultivated but already absorb multiple spirt ring

3yr
galactica
galacticaLv2

-Typical Doulou dalu fanfiction. -bad writing .................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Mukilan_Manimaran
Mukilan_ManimaranLv4

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3yr
Zaztra_Vandesh
Zaztra_VandeshLv10

It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.

2yr
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