this really is one of the best free novels I have ever read period; just everything about it the world building, the character development, the abilities, the power system, the quality of the writing itself everything is phenomenal! the author is also very active in the comment section, which probably doesn't mean a lot since I was the only person in there but I always appreciate it when an author interacts with their audience. (btw this is a re-release of the novel because webnovel glitched and the author couldn't release chapter for some reason, that's why you can't see my comments and why I'm so aware of the story)

This story feels rushed I and I believe others would be able to enjoy this story more if you, the author, put more time working on the base of your story. It has an interesting plot that personally interested me but from what I have read is being, and I mean well when saying this, terribly executed. The utter lack of details of the power system is annoying one chapter the mc is level 10 the next he saying he's basically level 25, which would be cool in all if we were told what he did to get to that level. We never see the mc fight like ever. The mc has a master class that allows to forcibly enslave from what we know any being and he gets 50% exp from their kills but we never get told how much exp a being gives which in turn just makes it feel like the author just levels them up conveniently. It is also said that the levels get increasingly hard to level up after certain marks for instance at level 25 it get harder and then 50 and so and so forth but the mc and his slaves seem to be leveling up even faster than before. I also seen that the author planned this story all the way up to volume 9 which I was originally excited about but you honestly wouldn't be able to tell if he just thought of on the spot none of this story seems well thought out. And don't even get me started on the fact that every interaction the mc has is with a girl and they conveniently have amazing potential. I have seen people put more effort into fanfics than this story and I'm not trying to discredit the author but its just what I get when I read your story. Its a pure wishfulfilment story. The author put most of his effort into describing his characters which doesn't matter if their setting is a blank canvas.

Early in the novel the mc straight up enslaves a woman because she's strong in the future. Needs a slavery tag as I wouldn't have bothered to read the chapters I did if it had it. I also wonder if these reviews are fake or everyone who reads this is just okay with the mc performing a soul enslavement on an innocent woman.

I like this. .................................................................................... I'm obviously not good at writing reviews.

please this thing is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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It’s frustrating, I thought this novel will be a good read but it’s not. Apocalypse and regression is one of my favorite genres but this novel is a mehhh for me. And because of the woman, getting past chapter 40 is hard. She is a BURDEN, I didn’t even bother remembering her name. The Mc? Too many stupid decisions. I don’t want to dishearten you author but this is my honest review.

Interesting story, with a mysterious and exciting power system. I think it has a ton of potential and it growing like this proves it. I will add it to my collection and hope to see the author mature as a writer! Again, just the dialogue needs a touch-up, but it is suitable for now. Another updated review will come your way once I get deeper into the story!

Editor and proofreader sorely needed. Reads like a second or third draft, not a finished one. Fortunately the writing is usually clear enough to mentally rewrite as I read so the riveting story doesn't get bogged down by it. The character reveals are well paced and development is clear in both the characters and the story. Lots of surprise twists mixed in with a natural progression of the plot. All in all, a story worth throwing most of my free passes at while saving my coins up to deal with cliffhangers and insatiable curiosity moments (lots of those, I admit). A story well worth many hours of my attention, and hopefully yours as well. {^θ^}