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Firstly, I need to put out that I have heavy bias in this. Eleceed is one of my favourite webtoons, meaning I don't have any intentions of dropping this as long as nothing is done that I REALLY dislike. The story is pretty short right now, so this may not be the most educated of reviews but my biggest problem is how rushed everything felt up to this point. Seven years is a great deal of time to flesh out the relationships he has with people and I just felt like that wasn't done. However, my opinions are subject to change as the story develops further. - I'm not trying to bash on anything just trying to give some constructive criticism that hopefully will be received well.

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OniWolf04

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Thanks for your review sorrt about the time skip thing i will do flash backs and stuff i only time skiped because i dont want people to be bored.

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Don't be sorry, it's your story, I was just inputting my opinion on it. I do appreciate that you took what I said into consideration though.

OniWolf04:Thanks for your review sorrt about the time skip thing i will do flash backs and stuff i only time skiped because i dont want people to be bored.