Review Detail of Sir_GENESIS in One Piece: My Infinity Gauntlet!
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M this is my review after reading for a while now, your story has a great start. With smooth grammar with few little mistakes when using proper words, all is good until you dicided to go with the common trope, 8 of 10 one piece fan fics out there go with having some of luffys crew into theirs. Turning this great fic into that of a meh, or barely good enaugh. If you want to have something that is popular, atleast go with something original. One piece world's is big and diverse. That's all.
One Piece: My Infinity Gauntlet!
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Have not read yet but... I like when they choose some of original characters to be friends or lovers with. That is the whole point of going in that world. You go for power, firends, dreams and woman. You choose to go to that world because you liked anime or movie of that world. You liked it because of the main characters. So you go for them. Dont know if i explained that right, english is my 3 language.
marcelll3214:Have not read yet but... I like when they choose some of original characters to be friends or lovers with. That is the whole point of going in that world. You go for power, firends, dreams and woman. You choose to go to that world because you liked anime or movie of that world. You liked it because of the main characters. So you go for them. Dont know if i explained that right, english is my 3 language.