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The story is good going but I would suggest you improve your synopsis a bit more...it is not at all attractive so, just add something more ig. Else your writing style is good quite friendly and the characters are good too... overall, it is a good work and can be given a try if anyone interested in romance.

As Long As You Are With Me

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Done!