REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! Stunning writing quality! Character development and more! ADVICE None, the author is a better writer compared to me. Kudos!
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LIKEThe honor is mine, my friend. I've read five chapters of your novel so far and I have to say that you've done something I simply do not have the discipline and ambition to pull off. Anyone can write a fanfiction like me but to build a new world like you have and to have consistently grown it to such heights is something truly special. That enthroned angel is like nice Imperius :P
I will stay free to read for readers like you who loved it! Encouragement is the only thing I want in return. Binge read it all! đ I hope you enjoy all 72 chaps of it. Onwards!
Protagonist_M:The honor is mine, my friend. I've read five chapters of your novel so far and I have to say that you've done something I simply do not have the discipline and ambition to pull off. Anyone can write a fanfiction like me but to build a new world like you have and to have consistently grown it to such heights is something truly special. That enthroned angel is like nice Imperius :P