Review Detail of AstersforSeptember in Alexandrite: The beauty in every moment

It is I, the author! I'll be shameless and give my story a review xD I already have an idea about how the plot will follow through but there are still chances that some parts of the story will have holes xD Maybe I'll let you guys fill those up! Anyway~ I do hope that you give my story a chance! I'll read your comments and review for future reference and improvement! See ya~!