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Firstly, I must begin by saying that if the story lacks anything, it certainly isn't potential. I can see that the author has things planned out as there are small hints, nth major, that show where the story might be heading. The author also provides us with words and phrases that are unique to the story which requires the reader to read on to understand what they are. The author doesn't info dump and brings along points quite clearly which I like. Synopsis: A decent synopsis that captures what the book is about in a few short sentences which is what it should be. Well done. I also liked the fact that the author pointed out that the story is already planned out and that things happen for a reason. Many readers on this website fail to realize that some authors already have their story planned out and some details that are given in the story aren't plot holes or unnecessary information. It is simply foreshadowing and this book contains that. Writing Quality: While the vocabulary and choice of words aren't bad, I would say that this is the weakest point of the book. The book contains a lot of run-on sentences, incorrect usage of punctuation, and missing capitalizations. Not to be offensive to the author as I believe this is a good book but with the missing capitalizations, a lot of readers will be turned off because it might look like something being written by someone who is just starting English at first glance. I went up to around 10 chapters and then previewed from 11-26 to see if these mistakes were cleared up but they persisted. I recommend that the author edit these chapters and fix these mistakes if readers are to be more attracted to the book. I rated this 3 stars. Story Development: Done quite well. Though the reader might be a little confused at first, it becomes clearer as they read along which is why I believe this is the strongest part of this book. Good work author. 5 stars. Character Design: I was unsure whether or not to mark this because not many details are given about the characters. I saw instances in the earlier chapters like "man in the black suit" or "girl with the green hair". Those are very vague and do not paint a proper picture for the reader. Would recommend putting just a little more effort into these descriptions. I rated this a 4. World Background: Not much was said about this either. I do like the concept of the Reading Challenge and all but apart from that, not much was said in regards to the world the characters are in. You could at least let the characters interact with their world just a little more to paint a picture for the reader. Unless they're someone like me who has an active imagination, I believe it will be difficult for some readers to see how the world around the characters looks. Add more details to this and you'll be golden, author! 4 stars. Overall: A pretty decent book that I would recommend mostly to newer readers simply because of the grammatical errors. But if these were fixed, this is easily recommendable to seasoned readers. Author, I know it's difficult but do not give up, no matter what. I've been there with little reviews, collections, and comments or feedback on my story. Things will be better if you actively learn from your mistakes and apply them. Trust me. I'll try my best to keep an eye on this book but I honestly don't have much time to read as I used to do. Work is killing me (x. x ) and not to mention I have like 3 different books working on at the same time. I wish I could read like I used to but the lack of time drains me of motivation but I'll do my best to come back here when I get the chance to let you know my thoughts. Good luck, author-sama! You've got this.