Hey guys, just a newbie and beyond shameless author here. This is my first book so mistakes are to be expected but I promise to remove those and improve. Thanks for reading[img=recommend] and sorry in advance for my poor knowledge and writing.

Its a great fanfic, it has enough comedy to balance the opness and making the fanfic stand out from the like 200 other dxd fanfics out there.

You should make him use senjutsu instead cure energy because the world's law still an awesome FF tho. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Without some minor, more annoying problems like MC not earning SI points even after getting so involved in the main storyline, Asia feeling pain when praying even before she became a demon, or the bad description of six eyes by the system and things like I would give 4 stars for this fanfic. The fanfic itself is a very generic one and with nothing special of the kind in which I have seen many and all abandoned by the author in a short time, but these fanfics are so common for a reason and that reason is that although they have nothing special, are interesting to read to kill time. I recommend this fanfic to anyone who likes to read something generic without much hope of getting far, I sincerely hope that the author does not abandon the fanfic, but as a fanfic reader I know that this is very likely to happen and even more so with generic fanfics.

I think i cummed imidietly after seeing the tiltle of the story ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

In terms I liked the story at first, but the MC made me unbearable. —End— I'm not going to give a talk about mistakes I'm sleepy xd [img=exp][img=exp]

gimme moarrrr this stuff is toooo good please don't stop otherwise I won't have anything left to read this is without a doubt one of the best fanfic's I have ever read it can be worked on regarding the spellings, there are a few mistakes here and there but it doesn't impede in the reading much so keep it up!!!

for the moment it is on the right track, and not to mention the use of gojo power, just waiting for more chapters. ***************************************************

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