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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv42yr
2022-09-02 05:57

Author, do you know why you don't have as many readers? The main problem is that it does not exist, there is no main protagonist and main antagonists. It would be great if this story had a main character and other secondary characters. The story is currently too bland, there is no character development because they are NPCs, there is no personal goal or ambition that drives story development. Author, good luck with your projects. For the next story add main characters. Postscript; the anime "Gate" had 1 main character. The books, movies, comics, animes, manga, with the highest ratings and fundraising had a main character. Even the movie "Titanic" had 2 main characters, being a true story about a maritime accident. 🙂

Summoning America

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4.4
210 Chs

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Erica_Arcadia
Erica_ArcadiaLv1

It is harder to sell and make a story with a main character that isn't one person, not even human, In this case we could argue that the main character is the entire planet of Elysia and their antagonist is the Ravernal Empire, or maybe the unknown entities who summoned the nation to the planet. I have only read the manga of the original LN, Japan Summons, so I don't know where its story is right now Now before you say I'm defending this novel like an idiot, like many others who I tried to explain my perspective on in other similar novels. This is from someone also enjoys stories written from a third-person's point of view.

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Angelo_Ramirez_7456
Angelo_Ramirez_7456Lv2

bro we don't care about your opinion we enjoy it and we're proud of it.

1yr
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And_It_Goes
And_It_GoesLv13

One of the best….

3yr

Azazel_70
Azazel_70Lv4

Good fanfic please dont drop . .. .. . ... . . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. .. . ..

3yr
Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4

Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!Great story please don't drop!!!!!!

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NyxNime
NyxNimeLv5

this is a hidden gem the only regret is i didnt find this novel sooner ., 10/10 please dont drop man :)))))) ..................................

2yr
Lu_Ck
Lu_CkLv13

Hey can you explain what is really transported over cause the president said it was only military equipment but why do they have skyscraper's and other things to help them trade with other nations cause if only military equipment were transferred then how do they make food and provide water cause the pipelines will not be there?

3yr
AntiLoliLewding
AntiLoliLewdingLv4

It's quite the decent fic. There's no other way for me to say it. There's a good reason for what the popper are doing, and honestly, this intrigues me I hope that you continue writing.

3yr
sacredyeti
sacredyetiLv15

honestly it could have been a lot better overall the updating schedule varies and really dragged the score down as well as the plot of the story kind of sloppy with plenty of room for improvement... I wish you good luck in your endeavors dear author but this is simply not a novel I particularly enjoyed

2yr
Hein_Min_III
Hein_Min_IIILv3

Please don't drop this [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]I need more...........

1yr
Volunter
VolunterLv1

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