Honestly this is a really amazingly good read I loved reading every sentence in this fiction... All the way up until the MC was used as a toy. The main character, From where I am currently reading is being controlled by Minato inside of his mind, Causing him unable to even save his own students and properly defend himself. Not only that infuriating piece of information but throughout the past few chapters the Main character was defenceless, The Dragonborn, A vampirelord, Someone who has been through years of combat can't defend against some poison. It is so mind numbingly annoying that I'm just going to drop this. It was an amazing and really great read but the moment the Main character became a doll for Minato pretty much is when it crossed my line of annoyance.

Hey Everyone! I am the author of this Readapted Fanfic(of Igornerd). The edited Versions of the earlier chapters is out and marked with a [2.0] This will be the "clean" version of this fanmade series. You might find these 2.0 Chapters not in "synch" with the events on those that dont had 2.0 marks, This was because those unmarked chapters were the "rough drafts" or preview/experimental versions which were intentionally released to gather some help and reviews on how to improve this series and which ones should be fixed. Please do note also that some 2.0 Chapters may have big changes but some may have none. I am still open to recommendations and suggestions so don't hesitate to notify me. (But still, these versions were not the final state as they may be subjected again to more revisions in the future. Probably if I get more ideas on how to make it better or if I found a good suggestion on the reviews/comments) And I do apologize if you see some quirky or clunky sentences or wrong use of words as I am not that good in English, so any corrections are welcome. \\(>w<\\)

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My god this is the best story i have read in a while. This new chapter gave me goosebumps

While I did enjoy this it started to become very annoying and aggrivating. For someone who has slain dragons and fought so many wars is portrayed as in my opinion kinda weak and honestly pretty dumb in some cases. I enjoyed it, I really did but he is way too weak for being who he is.

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The Premise is very good and it sounds interessting, However its very slow and arduous to read, The story takes a very long tIme to progress

I noticed and the official FF only has 22 chapters, I imagine you will continue more? ------------------------------------------------------