Review Detail of Crown_of_Flame in Devil Child

Your story is going well. The one thing I would complain about is that it was not once but more times when I found myself a little confused while reading. Though I must say you can turn this story into a great one. I'm waiting to see how'll you develop Noe what will he become. I'm waiting to see how'll you will make the darkness disappear. Keep up with your work.[img=recommend]