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Review Detail of Minxs in Unlimited Borrowing System

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Minxs
MinxsLv102yrMinxs

Only a few chapters in and here is my review. Professional story! That's all that comes to mind when I read this book. It's very detailed and has a nice plot. The author seems to have a set direction for the story, which gives the writing a sense of purpose (something not seen often on these webnovel books). I noticed a few mysteries already popping up that are itching for an answer. No big cons with this book. It's another great system read that could find a solid fan base on webnovel. I see a bright future for this book and the author. (4.8 whish it could be adjusted a bit higher) On a side-note : Idk how you will do it, but a story needs something that stands out in the beginning. Whether its a unique MC(blind, deaf, ect.), setting (growing up in a dumpster), or a mystery. You have some of these, but the truly great stories put their own twist. Just my little opinion, nothing more :)

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Unlimited Borrowing System

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Minxs
MinxsLv10Minxs

Hmmm, maybe have a chapter about the MC borrowing time from the system and have that be some key point in the story. Not necessarily reincarnating but more of his future self, sending a message back for his present self. Idk, maybe this can help you brainstorm!

kpthe1:Yes. Most of the people told me that the first chapter lacks the depth and I can't be ignorant about this. I'll try to re edit the first few chapters. thanks.
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Yes. Most of the people told me that the first chapter lacks the depth and I can't be ignorant about this. I'll try to re edit the first few chapters. thanks.