First, the writing is kind of choppy wity the pace. The first few chapters are confusing and not much is explained. All we really know is that the MC was in a dark place and then suddenly gained the sharingan. The story is virtually nonexistent, the only thing really established is faunus discrimination thats kind of abandoned halfway through the story. The start is extremely fast, and if you skip a sentence you'd probably be a bit lost. I was actually confused on how the MC saw all of those bandit's memories until it was said later his semblance was seeing dead people's memories. The only thing good about the story is the fight scenes and even those seem a bit bland with a lack of story The MC, Faith, doesnt really have much of a character, hes mostly just a blank sheet. It says that he was a girl in his past life but it doesn't really elaborate beyond that. His personality is not well done, all we know is that he dislikes the tension between the Faunus and Humans, but thats honestly it. His romance with Velvet feels pretty forced as neither of them know virtually anything about eachother. All he really does is replace Fox in team CFVY and doesnt really ad much to the story. His relationship with others could definetly be elaborated on. The idea of the story is really good but horribly executed, the story is rushed, the MC is not explained, and the sharingan is kind of stupidly done.
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You know the sad thing is i agree. That’s why I’m trying to fix everythint from the earlier chapters right now which will take a bit of time.
Thank you
