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I was born with glass bones and paper skin. Every morning I break my legs, and every afternoon I break my arms. At night, I lie awake in agony until my heart attacks put me to sleep.

this is good .......................................................................................................................

Alright, reading so far to chapter 8 this is pretty good as the foundation of this fan fic is relatively new compared to some other things… *cough* one piece *cough* anyway this is off to a good start so far as I don’t see many problems so far in the recent chapters as overall it’s interesting.

it's good I think grammar is also good the mc is good the plot can sometime be a bit rushed tho it was necessary it's also a relatively new idea for a novel/fanfic and the author listen to his neighbours Spanish music on the toilet