too ridiculous. armies just pop left and right and conquests right to left. Too little politics, totally losing the flavour of GOT. even OPness need some reason.

The MC is a kid with a sword, but if you have no problem with that go for it.............................................................................

it's a solid story, the main character has a nice background, and the story has good world building because the author uses the fact that his main character is a historian and develops around it. it does have some issues though, the first that comes to mind is the unrealistic politics, another is how the main character changes his mindset quickly, also the portrayals of can canon characters, and the bashing tone of the story, it's not there outright but you can tell. Another thing is that there is no solid reason given on why the mc does what he does, why he goes to such lengths. he also has a sort of god complex where he thinks he knows the characters, like in the chapter he's thinking of making Ned a wolf he has an internal monologue, and goes on a rant about how Ned is a foolish man who ruined house stark, and how Jon's line is better than Brandon's line, and it suddenly spirals into how he knows he can manipulate Bobby B. the final thing I have to say is about Torrhen stark, it seems that the protagonist truly doesn't understand why he knelt instead of fighting, the north had no more shifters at the time, and even if they did I doubt it would make that big of a difference, the fact is that as honourable as fighting sounds, they were up against dragons and Torrhen is a king so he has to protect his citizens, fighting against flying giant fire breathing lizards isnt exactly doing that, and also It was the correct thing to make his big brothers son his heir since it was rightfully his from the beginning. this is all I have to say, apart from the highlighted problems it's an okay story, great world building. I'm looking forward to more

I like to see house stark rise and do the them some good........................................................................................

Will the love interest be dany or someone else my personal favorite is dany it is kinda cliche but it’s cliche for a reason if not her who will it be

This is one if the best Game of thrones fan fic's that I read in webnovel. Story line is different comparing to the others, the pace of the story makes you want to read more. Just keep it up the work you are doing and thank you for your efforts author take care.

This is a unique GOT fanfic. In the future will he have a love interest? I'm loving this, by the way, keep it up! ...........................................................................................

It's pretty I like how you started it with the hole Info chapter It gives us some perspective I didn't quite get if the Sword is Valyrian one but I guess we will learn latter for sure. One thing that you could do is A back round or Bio kinda think for the new characters you make so we know know a bit about them... just a thought. Also does anything else before we begin, the first 'saga' of this story, change that would affect the story?

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