Review Detail of TahsinHossain in WHEN DEATH SKIPPED A SOUL : LIFELESS

I have to say, it's a really nice novel! It built up the suspense in a good way, which made me read further. The only thing I'd suggest is to make the first chapter a bit more vague. We don't know what the Holshire (did I write it right?) woods is, nor we don't know what the Academy is. Of course, we get to know about them in the later chapter, but as we didn't know about them in Chapter 1, using the names made it feel a bit disorienting. Perhaps use some vague words like the "dark woods" or something, instead of using the actual names. Otherwise, great story so far! Looking forward to the future chapter!