Review Detail of Vanbun in The Hidden Wife Of The Cold CEO

The overview sound interesting but I as read more it just get boring and no development. I actully got up to chapter 520 before I call it quits even though I did jump a few chapter as well. The storyline Is a bit unrealistic since the FL is so innocent and naive yet the grandpa see the potential in her and know that she would be prefect for his grandson and force them to get married. For a cold ceo the ML is a bit naive too, he said he had eye on her from the start but was indifference since ge already has a gf during the time. The more I read the more I see that this story was stretch out so much. The author try to add to many plot and idea to it to keep it cute and sweet whole using a typical theme but wanted it to be different somehow, yet it lack character and plot development. it’ll be nicer if the author can go in depth about the FL work itself and be more descriptive about the design and setting. It need better transition flow from one problem to the next. Overall it’s a potential novel but definitely need to editing work