Review Detail of Lazy_Bitch13 in One Wild Night

Chapter 98 review, I have to review in this part as I am thinking of dropping this book for reasons I will list after this.The book is good, at least with the standard in this site, this book is still above average. Here's my problem, It's the pacing of the story. I don't mind if the story likes to talk and made conversation and likes to accomplish a lot of scenes in a one day settings but at least made it more interesting. The story, at least for now, revolves into two romantic pairs, our main leads and the side casts. The side cast story was even more interesting than the main one but the author loves to interchange the chapters from this story to the other story from time to time, which makes the reading experience draggy. Like you are anticipating what will happen in the main story then the thrill will be cut off because the side story comes in. When I was also invested with the side story then the next chapter it'll turn into the main, you don't know how frustrating that is. There's a reason why books are usually has main cast where the story revolves instead of a lot. It's like reading different books at the same time, and there is a reason I don't do that, it's distracting and I like a linear story without interruption.Then came the characters, they're hypocrites. they are not perfect and I understand they were made like that to fleshed them out but that doesn't mean I like them. The ML just keeps piling up his lies without any guilt or apparent distress throughout and that shows character. He's manipulative, which is a red flag. If he can lie so much for his selfish needs to the one he likes even before they were in a relationship, then what about when they were in a relationship? Will he become honest? I doubt it because I think it's his nature. Then lets talk about the MC. I honestly don't know what's likeable of her. As a main character, she's pretty plain. I get tired reading her. She has no charm or anything admirable of her. I especially dislike how she can't own up to her own feelings. She's taciturn and wishy washy. She's not headstrong, she's not talented, not driven, she didn't even have motivation and goals. She has no aspirations and I honestly don't know what the ML saw on her. Why was she even the MC when her character is like an extra. She even has no hobby. She's boring and it's really hard to cheer for someone's love life when you don't care about her. I'm always questioning why the heck is the ML doing all of these things to this girl, what's so intriguing about her, please let us understand the author. I don't like that she's a hypocrite, can't own up on her feelings, and can't act up what she says she'll do.