Review Detail of VinixxVidixxVici in Journey in Pokémon

Well I have to agree that your English has improved drastically my friend and I am happy that you have written this story because your pervious one had immense potential but you had to drop it. and as for criticism I would recommend that Alexander uses all the resources he has to maximum, like his unwillingness of using protection of professor Oak is illogical at his current laughable strength, so I recommend that you make Alexander use all his resources without hesitation. otherwise there is nothing I can criticize, Alexander is the perfect protagonist with most ration mind and his indifference to others is perfect because on one would care for him and could hinder him so why help them. his knowledge seeking attitude along with his hunger for power is perfect. please don't drop this Brother it has immense potential, best of luck.

Really glad you're back, i read your fanfic's constantly back in the day

C'mon continue the Fanfic bro it literally had a superb start.