13 Chapters here already, and like everyone else, I can also see the potential in the story and its characters. On the critique, there are no errors that I could find, updating stability is perfect, story is developing quite right, the perfection of each characters can be seen in their imperfections, since no one in this world is perfect, the plot seems interesting, hence I am urging you who is reading these reviews to give the story a shot.
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