The whole story is good. So many timeskips and the X-Virus is kinda similar to COVID-19. I didn't expect your chapters to have so many "—", and the first chapter doesn't have a speech, which is quite shocking. In overall, I had fun reading yours. Keep it up and good luck on your writing journey.
Cloudthief
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