Review Detail of ShadowKatake in Dawn of Twilight

So far I haven't found anything wrong about the novel, in fact I kinda like reading it (or it must be due to me having the taste in this kind of genre.). the writing was so vivid that it made me immerse in the author's novel world. the mc had a great character design, too. the problem is the writing stability which is easy to fix so the author can rest assure.