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JunRaya
JunRayaLv43yr
2021-05-10 23:32

Just going to give it a 5 sinces its a good fanfic. Mc is op and i Mean OP but the main focus on the story isnt the battles right now its just the Mc trying to have fun and live a better life than he had in the past wee he was bored. Writing Quality is good its long and its easy to understand. Updates are 7 times a week so yep its fantastic. Story development is also good the mc wants to interact with factions and its in the development stages so i can expect new things in the future, character design is "Perfect" since the mc literally is perfect which i am fine w and he is op but im sure its not about his perfection that the story wants to go on instead the interactions and the world in it. World background is also good currently in One Piece and i think will be going to other worlds. Keep it up <3

(On Hold) The Not So Perfect Being In The Omniverse

BitchPleased
4.8
35 Chs

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BitchPleased
BitchPleasedAuthor

Hello Author here, this my second fanfiction on this site. I had this idea for some time in mind so I decided to write it here. You would find many things in the fanfic which some of you might like or some of you might not. Still, I had given myself a review so here I am.

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Thigh_Master0124
Thigh_Master0124Lv4

Very good. This fanfic is not for weak to strong fans it's for OP enjoyers with sharp jaws, tight abs, no flaws. This is harem story for giga chads. Well I hope MC will have every girl. Author are you planning to go for MCU?

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Aizen_S0suke
Aizen_S0sukeLv4

What can I say hmmm, very good fanfic you peasant? Writing Quality is good, stability of updates good, Story development is good. Character design is good, World background is good, and overall "PLOT" is good as well. Giving him 12 inches is good in one piece since there is a lot of smexy tall ladies. In conclusion, Aizen sensei approves.

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TheimmortalSpoiler
TheimmortalSpoilerLv1

Writing Quality:5/5 Stability of Updates:4/5 Story Development:5/5 Character Design:5/5 World Background4.5/5 what are you doing here.

3yr
fetishman
fetishmanLv14

guess its dropped‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎

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Reveal spoiler

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Aldeos
AldeosLv5

great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Izashi
IzashiLv13

I don't know just feeling like giving you 5 stars because you mentioned that there won't be any clones. .. ..... .. ... .. ... .... .. ... .

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