Review Detail of Shesaiditsme in Two-Faced(DiCE?)

I love this book until now but smthg amiss, I mean smthg's still lacking in it. If the chapters continue on like this then the readers will surely get bored easily, in my opinion, you haven't put soul in the novel. That's just my guess. I hope you'll understand what I'm saying. Hope I'll get better chapters then now, next time when you'll update.