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SealDeity
SealDeityLv23yr
2021-06-19 14:42

This book is trash. From the very beginning, we are given no introduction to what is going on other than that 300,000 people from earth were transported in a mysterious way, then all became the lords of a planet. For one, the world-building is garbage. How can there be magic and tech civilizations in the same galaxy? Another thing is later on in the book, we are told the planet is desolate and barren. If that is true, how can there be enough food for 100 million people? The author clearly put no thought total to the logical aspects of this book, and the concept is just another overpowered system book where MC does basically nothing except tell the system what to do. This author is clearly leeching off the tried and true system novels, but this one is simply a bad concept with bad execution. I do not. recommend this book and it is simply a waste of time to read it.

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DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

... you probably only read 1 chapter if you got only this amount of information. you ask how can there be magical and technological worlds in the same galaxy? bro our galaxy has 100 billion stars... do you even understand how much that is?? you telling me there can't be magical and technological worlds in there? the closest magical world mc knows of is 2000 light years away. the closest semi magical world(not really magical but the intelligent race there are dragons is like 20 light years away). world building is quite interesting but there is not much details on the 2 worlds he has been on(its more concentrated on the galactical scale) i would like for him to be more interactive with the planets and the residents maybe after the war. you said that 100mil population is impossible in a desolate world? first of they are not carbon based life forms like us... this was mentioned in the first few chapters and let me guess you didn't even read it. ever heard that silicon based life forms are very much possible? reaserch a bit and find out what kind of habitat they would need to survive... I can see that sci-fi is not the type of books you read you lack knowledge of the most basic scientific facts anyways i could rant more but i wont, hope i explained some things to you. have a good day/night.

WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6

What you said about magic and science can’t be together has offended me to no ends… you uncultured idiot

ImaginationGalaxy
ImaginationGalaxyLv14

I would definitely agree that this novel has little planning and thought put into it

LiquidCallous
LiquidCallousLv3

welcome to webnovel, land of trash translations home of the world ending grand myriad blue azure dragon seven wave ocean river fist sword technique.

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