Review Detail of HotSauce67 in Chaotic Journey.
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Things I hate about in this fanfic -Drama -His laugh "fufufufu" -Gregory is known for caring for each other, so on. but they neglect him because he dont has the power of destruction. -I want him to focus on the DXD world but it takes 50+ chapters for Dxd to show up -he needs from his family but he never loves his family(vergo so on) - it's hard to read not from grammar -annoying that's all. this is the second fic that is skipped over 50+ chapters.
Chaotic Journey.
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Ever heard of alternative universe??? Of course the gremories neglect him it was how we designed them if you like the. Good gremories then go watch the original... A fanfic is supposed to be different in the way the author wants not the exact same thing as the original The 50+ chapters is normal the novel has a slow place... Do people don't read the synopses and the warnings it contain?? He never loves his family? If you are talking about the original one then you are right the second one you are not right... Oh and don't come with " he tortures his future family members".... He clearly states that he will do anything to get what he wants. The novel was designed that way if you had read the actual warning then you wouldn't have had to waste your time...
Bigsmartdumbdumb:Ever heard of alternative universe??? Of course the gremories neglect him it was how we designed them if you like the. Good gremories then go watch the original... A fanfic is supposed to be different in the way the author wants not the exact same thing as the original The 50+ chapters is normal the novel has a slow place... Do people don't read the synopses and the warnings it contain?? He never loves his family? If you are talking about the original one then you are right the second one you are not right... Oh and don't come with " he tortures his future family members".... He clearly states that he will do anything to get what he wants. The novel was designed that way if you had read the actual warning then you wouldn't have had to waste your time...
Is this what you do for a living answer 3 month old comments? I feel like you are insulting other people to hide your own insecurities...
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