Review Detail of kingdomkings in Isekai : Cheat Internet connection

thank you very much for the suggestions and input ... sorry if there are many shortcomings in writing, this is the first work in English and also the first time writing in English so it's still shortcomings ... in the future we will make improvements in terms of writing, again sorry

Your English will improve as long as you continue writing. If you can't afford an editor or proofreader the try to learn English from scratch I am doing the same. there are many videos on YouTube you can take a look. The overall story idea is good 👍 keep up the good up and improve yourself constantly.