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Jack_Alexander24
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2024-06-25 14:22

This review I wanna declare my departure, I just read 10 chaps and I am rather shameless for making a review based on that, but I have a logical reason for that. First is the grammar, it’s like reading MTL, and you expect me to read it by using so much brain power? no thanks, though it is readable compared to MTL, but still I don’t wanna read it cause it irritates me for breaking my immersion towards the story, like nobody would speak such grammatical error, even it is, it’s very unnatural. Second, Lock chapters, considering the quality of the grammar, I would not waste my free pass. There are many novels books that are much worth compared to this and would rather spend them on it than this. Third, too much to read, I have many book and novels in my reading list and would rather read this if I don’t have any much of a choice. In conclusion, I don’t wanna read it unless author fixed the grammars. But I would like to say that this novel has so much potential, although the title is rather misleading! it says cheat internet connection but its just mc having an OP phone like other OG isekai smartphones novels, but this smartphone literally an abyss that eats money to use an app! Also, there’s also the issue where mc just producing products out of nowhere, and the city would not be dumb to not investigate such stuff, a man suddenly pops up and yet producing from who knows where the products came from and earned so much money? well that’s my take for this, the story has no issue asside from what I commented on, and would recommend if you waste your brain and time for this novel.

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