Thank you for reading this novel, there are still many shortcomings in terms of writing, especially in English. Sorry, in the future I will correct any mistakes in writing. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

I'm sorry, i tried. i really tried. but i can't anymore, it was so confusing for me. if ever try using your language then find someone who can translate this to english or just let someone proofread your english. this may help you a lot from publishing better chapters and also learning english a bit more.

U have to write more clearly cause I can focus sometimes but overall it's plot is good but just improve your writing capabilities I know it's hard but try using grameely u can avoid gramer mistakes

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Dont know what is happening with the broken grammar. Sorry but till you edit your work, I cannot continue reading. Great idea with the story, just needs a better quality finish of your work.

this book i great I would have given more rating but the sentences are a bit.... However don't be disappointed correct your writing a bit more and the story will shine. I liked the story overall just make sure u write more clearly maybe get a editor who is good in English

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

This novel has more flaws than that one fantic novel with 1000 chapter and I thought that was bad but this is just worse. The whole structure of the writing need to be fixed before people can enjoy the plot of the novel.

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Sorry author. I have to stop reading this novel. I can't understand it at all even it's written in English. Try to find someone else to proofread your work.