Here is another another example of a typical shameless author. I am giving my own novel a five star ratings so thag i can fool myself. It may motivate me in future, just joking.

Awesome brother, don't drop this novel. Just keep writing like this. Please brother add Hancock in your harem. so please more more more more more more more......

Why a novel as good as this little read and comment. This novel is also dropped even though it is very good and interesting in my opinion. I hope this novel is edited again and re-released 😍. Thanks for the chapter.

Just please continue this story, would be devastated to see this get dropped, systems and one piece are always a good match for one piece fanfictions🙏🙏

I beg you to have my heart I want more MORE I don't know how to say but you give me inspiration to make a fanfiction too but a lot of mao op adca op mega haha🤔😘🙄

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God job..and nice 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Harem kah.??

I can see the whole premise of this fanfic in just the first 4 chapters. Train and be stronger, find girls and simp on them, help them to fall in love with him, kill bad guys and win in life. Disinterest.

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