Review Detail of Awesome_Alankrit in Living a loving life

well let me be straight and simple. I like yanderes and probably most of us do. so if you are here to enjoy yandere and craziness then you are at a good place. so the story is something like this:- the mc has grown up with utmost care by his mother and sister like a girl. not going into much detail he gets a system one day and it helps him in clearing 'worlds'. in those worlds he has only one objective- find a girl and make her his girlfriend. sounds easy? well not quite. just read it and you will find out it is much more darker and crazier than you can imagine. to author- I like this story. honestly I have read tens of yandere stories. and this one can be one if my favorite. hmm so for suggestions I would like the system to be more helpful ( I mean something like shop or upgrades or something) it is good enough but still. the updates are good . but the world building needs more effort. also I would like if you add multiple pov too(it would be better if it constitutes of an entire chapter). some grammatical mistakes but that's ok. and add some more craziness. the story is still starting and I am excited. I don't write much review, but I think this one deserves it. readers just go for it and author don't stop or I will haunt you. 🤗🤗