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Currently, I believe my character design is perfect, the writing quality is also pretty good, no typos nor are there any grammar issues. The story development is technically the plot of the Anime, but with little tweaks here and there, so it's good. And same with world background. Stability of Updates... heck, I hate this. I update whenever I want, whether it'd be a day, an hour, a month, or a year. It's my decision to update, you as viewers have no say in this.
《ch 1-16》 ▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - its realy good 5☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
Quick Summary: MC was a teacher in her past life. She died. And she woke up in a snowy mountain as a baby. Writing Quality: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ -Mistakes: Haven’t seen one or to unnoticeable that I didn’t see -Words make sense and create a great story with emotions and sometimes sound effects Updating Stability: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ -So far I think it’s around once a day -At six pm in China-in US it is one am-thou for me it updated at US 8 am for some reason...is it just me 🤔 Character Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ -Main character makes sense-isn’t just one thing: Rational -Other characters have reasons to-make sense-nice backstories that explain things, but is like part of one chapter, so doesn’t deviate from MC’s story Story Development:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ -Story pacing good, doesn’t give mc op stuff immediately and even then after op, mc progresses in reasonable pace -Motiviations make sense World Background: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ -Anime World: Demon Slayer -She knows World and uses her knowledge rationally 1000 Words 💫🌟⭐️✨😊
The author made a very good fanfiction which cant be easily found on this website and simply dropped it in the name of a short ending ... DON'T WRITE A FANFIC SIMPLY IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO END IT PROPERLY IT IS BETTER TO DROP IT AND LET SOMEONE ELSE CONTINUE IT
PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
This is so good. The grammar and spelling are perfect, the characters feel natural and not forced. I love the abilities, and the interactions with the characters. And best of all is the future romance, which I hope will be yuri :3
I think it is a very good story and the characters. I hope you don’t drop this one and a Because I am looking forward to how the story progres
Amei até agora... espero ansiosamente por novas atualizações.................. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Alfonzo Marcus and Elicia Taylor, a pair of lovers who were preparing to marry in the near future, tragically lost their lives in a car accident. However, this was not the end of the road for either of them. When they next opened their eyes, they found themselves in a small orphanage in the port town of Hargeon. After connecting with the memories of their previous lives, they realized that they were in the world of one of their favorite anime, Fairy Tail. Now, how will Alfonzo and Elicia change not only their own fates, but also the fates of those around them? ============================================================================== At present, this novel is not my main focus. My other book, High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms is what I will be focusing on until it is finished. Updates for this story will mainly happen on Saturdays and Sundays, unless inspiration hits me out of nowhere. Also, my drawing talent is abysmal. So, if anyone draws any of the characters, I'd love to see them.
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Naoki, unexpectedly finds himself transmigrated into the vibrant Pokémon world. Inheriting a charming, yet modest ranch, he dreams of a tranquil life surrounded by adorable and fluffy Pokémon. Despite the challenges, Naoki's heart is set on crafting a life filled with simple joys and magical meals that bring him and his Pokémon closer together. Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to the cover image. If you are the rightful owner and would like it removed, I will take it down promptly. ------- This is a Translation ------- Raw Name: 这次不当训练家了 Original Author: 骑车的风 If you want early access join my Patreon :- patreon.com/Keepsmiling818