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2021-06-22 18:39

This book's setting should be American since the characters are American... however..the author writes using Chinese setting ..I mean Chinese way of life like calling people Master Raul.. vegetable king Kelvin and so on is typically Chinese.... author please stop this and make the book more American.. American people are always proud and nosy.. Chinese like to compare between themselves and slander each other...the Mc is also typically Chinese because he seems to fall in love easily and being swayed by the female leads.. anyway the novel is a good one...the grammatical errors are few ..the author should continue with this book..

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