The whole concept is good but the characters doing some cringe moment and some weird logic responses. I tried reading some more but i can't take it anymore so i decided not to torture myself.
Wizzez
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LIKEThats infortunate to hear, but I see that you only reached chapter 3. The story starts to shape up for the better at chapter 10. My first few chapters were my first go at writing, so many of the problems are fixed at about chapter 10. I’ll hope you give it another try, but if not, thats fine, and thanks for reading!
Wizzez:Thats infortunate to hear, but I see that you only reached chapter 3. The story starts to shape up for the better at chapter 10. My first few chapters were my first go at writing, so many of the problems are fixed at about chapter 10. I’ll hope you give it another try, but if not, thats fine, and thanks for reading!